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What American Idol Taught Me About Copywriting


I'm not an American Idol fan.

Ok, so I've never watched an episode. But I do enjoy watching the try outs for sheer entertainment.

I like watching contestants boogie around aimlessly in front of the judges with no obvious hope of making the cut.

They show up, open their mouths and swing their limbs haphazardly hoping for the best. Well, that's the way the judges see it anyway with comments like "that was horribly horrendous" and "good luck Hun"

Where am I going with this?

Well, there's a good chance your promotional materials do the same. They try their best. But in the end, if they don't have the ‘WOW’ factor, their readers dismiss them as second best.

See, when people read a website, their eyes scan the screen:

Top left, then down, middle and the last and least looked at area is the bottom right hand corner.

When you have great copy key areas, you have their attention and you minimize 'scanners'.

You won't grab a ‘scanner’ with slabs of text.

An expert copywriter makes the most of sub-headings, indentations, etc. to help draw them in and give your materials that extra punch. They give the eyes and mind something different to look at.

Like this:


This is a repeated sentence but your eyes will go to a certain section, guaranteed. This is a repeated sentence but your eyes will go to a certain section, guaranteed. This is a repeated sentence but your eyes will go to a certain section, guaranteed. This is a repeated sentence but your eyes will go to a certain section, guaranteed. Amazing But Awesome! This is a repeated sentence but your eyes will go to a certain section, guaranteed. This is a repeated sentence but your eyes will go to a certain section, guaranteed.

There's no doubt where your eyes went.

Try it for yourself on your own materials and see the power the ‘WOW’ factor can have on your response rates.

After all, you wouldn't want to think of your promotional materials next time you watch American Idol try outs now, would you?

Sammer Hakim is a Dallas-based copywriter serving clients worldwide and helping them with their sales materials. He can be reached at www.marketing-commando.com or drop him an e-mail: sammer@marketing-commando.com
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